Steampunk will wane like a coal ember

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So a couple years before steampunk hit, I predicted it would be big, and my prediction and timing were just about perfect. I wasn’t at the time certain if it would be here to stay or not. I’m back to give you another prediction. We’ve had a great boom, but it’s about to wane. And this is a good thing.

I’m not saying it will wane immediately. We have a couple years at this rate, maybe three. After that, I think it will recede into yet another genre in a crowded field. The costuming trend will also fade at cons.

We simply got too saturated too quickly, and my prescient mind saw the slow descent today.

But here’s why it’s a good thing. In terms of writing, fewer books means better books. Cherie Priest will still be around, I think there’s a couple books left coming out in the Boneshaker universe, and who knows, may she’ll keep on with it. Scott Westerfield will keep up with his series, Girl Genius will continue to genius through her universe. Tee Morris and Pip Ballantine will be working on their series which I think will do well. But there’s been a lot of dreck. This will fade and thankfully so. Some of the second tier purveyors I saw failed because they got caught up in the aesthetic without recognizing or requiring substance. I think the Steampod Podcast died because every story I heard on it spent more time choosing a name for the featured device than actually worrying about plot, character, or sentence construction. I’ll be glad to see this level of steampunk go.

And costuming. There’s brilliant work out there, and it will survive. People will keep working on it, and keep showing up to cons with it. Eventually, though, we’ll lose the “make it in brown and brass and put some gears somewhere” crowd.

I’m rarely wrong on these things. It could be saved by a really brilliant movie, something good enough to appeal to a mass market and still really please the aficionado. I can’t foresee that.

So the secret is to find the next thing. Not sure yet. I hope it’s good horror, or good dark fantasy. We’ll see.

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On Overcoming Writer’s Block

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Time once again to talk about craft, and this time, the bit of craft to go over is writer’s block. I’ve just been working over some of this myself, though I think mine is at least 80% schedule block. I did have to reconnect with the material I was working on, and had to go to extreme measures to do so.

Let me start off by saying I don’t believe in writer’s block. Never really had it, even this recent bout came down more to feeling connected enough to the material to feel the emotions I needed. It was more of a personal emotional block than a creative block. I never stopped writing other things, I never stopped coming up with new ideas. There was one project that was just a little out of where I could be viciously honest with myself.

I’m pretty good at getting people past writer’s block though, and I don’t seem to follow any standard methods of getting people past it, I just dive in like a therapist, diagnose, prescribe, and then it’s done.

Since I don’t believe in writer’s block, I’ll tell you what I do believe in, fear and blinders. In the case of reconnecting with my current WIP, the fear was am I really doing the emotions of the project justice. This may not be the fear you’re having, it may be a structural fear, a fear of lost direction, or any of several other fears.

I also recently ran across an article on 20 ways to overcome writer’s block, and let me tell you, a lot of it was bullshit. Let me just dispel these points before I get to mine.

One of them was go to a writer’s workshop. Well, if you’re in a major urban area, you can probably find a few in the metro area, but if you aren’t in a big area, you may have to wait for a convention. At any rate, what is happening while you pursue this means of getting out of writer’s block? You’re putting off writing. And the more you put it off, the more doubt creeps in and you’re digging a bigger hole. Don’t wait for a workshop. Get on facebook and twitter and find some writers, bounce ideas off of them. Instant feedback is way better than waiting for a workshop.

Another one this article mentioned is relaxation techniques. There again, something that isn’t writing. If you’re so stressed about writing, this may not be the thing for you, I mean, you won’t be a successful actor if you can’t get your butt on stage. I write better when I’m agitated, anyway.

Sleeping on it. Sometimes a rest is good, but being tired is not writer’s block. If you’re blocked and you’re thinking about sleeping on it, sit that butt back in the chair and write. Sleeping on it will only get you further from writing. Sleeping on it is good when you’ve written your little heart out and you’ve practically had an orgasm because your last bit of output is so good you need a cigarette and a reach around.

Reading inspirational quotes. Did inspirational quotes ever  work? I mean, if they did, there wouldn’t be so many parodies of inspirational quotes. Forget that new age crap. If you are reading inspirational quotes, you aren’t writing. You can read Ghandi and Dr. Phil all you like, but are they really helping you finish your book? No, confront the problem directly and boldly. This goes for another of their suggestions, making an inspiration board. Isn’t this just a way of wasting more time than just reading inspirational quotes? Forget about it. Get your butt in a chair. Write.

They also mention checking the news, which is something I usually do in avoidance of work. News may inspire a story, but it won’t get you over a block.

Another suggestion this post had was to take a walk. I’m iffy on this one. Taking a walk does two things, it accomplishes a change of scenery, and gets the blood flowing. I’ve never been a believer in changing scenery, and leaving your desk means leaving your post as a writer. I’m a pacer, and at the very least, a very active sitter. Stay in the room with your project. I actually keep a set of weights near my desk, and between scenes and paragraphs, I’ll do some exercise. This keeps my heart rate and energy up, and decreases the sedentary nature of the act of writing.

The primary problem I have with a list of 20 things you can do to get over writer’s block, however, isn’t any of the suggestions per se, it’s more that the article is throwing out suggestions without diagnosing a specific problem. I know you have writer’s block, but what is causing the block? It’s kind of like a doctor randomly prescribing something and seeing if it works. This is a craft, it has its techniques, and overcoming block is just one of the processes you’re going to have to deal with. We don’t throw stuff at the wall and see if it sticks. We study the problem, and come up with a likely solution.

So let’s run through it. The scenario I’m picturing is this: you’re working on a novel or something like that, and you just can’t get through a scene, and don’t want to move on to the next one without getting this one out. It is probably useful to go over a few categories of the background on why you’re blocked, and diagnose out a solution. While I am arranging things here by a specific group of issues that may be blocking you, I notice in my thinking I’m going with the most likely means of conquering your block and moving to things that are less likely to unblock you. Fear. Let’s start with fear.

So nothing you put down seems right, and you can’t get a word in without a massive wave of self-doubt. Nothing is good enough, it’s all crap and you should give up and become an accountant. We all deal with doubt. It is a temporary phase. Understand that first. Got it? Good. Now start writing, and don’t stop. Really. Any doubt just gets in your way of the goal, and the goal is getting more words at the end of the page, more pages at the end of the document, and getting it done. Really, this is just a draft. It doesn’t have to be perfect. Force yourself to write it no matter how bad you think it will be when you look at it. I have a hint, it probably won’t be as bad when you come back through, and a second hint, it’s just a draft. So you set down a thousand words or so that didn’t work. That’s not horrible. That can be an hour or less. No biggie. Stop thinking it is. It doesn’t have to be perfect the first time, no matter what your journalism class told you (unless you’re a journalist, then you’re on your own).

If you had so much fear, you wouldn’t have started, right?

If your fear is getting too much of you still, and you absolutely can’t get a scene out, the next best thing to do is to give a few minutes to what actually has to be in the scene, and write them out in a summary sentence each. Expand on those thoughts. Link one to the next to the next. It may not be pretty, in fact, it probably isn’t, but its done and set down. Expand on the first one, keep moving, try to create a flow to them. Or you can move on, but make a note to expand, edit, rewrite. I have less problems setting down something and moving on than I do stopping working. Stopping writing is the enemy, and it should be avoided at all costs.

Maybe you have an issue with is format. I find this happens a lot with people switching formats between screenplay and prose or comic script, or people who can’t decide what format it should be in. This can sometimes be obvious if you do an outline or at least a major act breakdown. If it isn’t in a nice three act formula, it probably isn’t a screenplay. But still, that person who is used to writing screenplays and wants to transition to prose may have some issues and see some scenes in a more cinematic style may get blocked when the format changes from dialog and description to prose. Write it in whatever format you feel it fits in. Get it out. Put words at the end of the page. Go back and re-write. In the interim you’ll figure out what format this is going to take. The prose may turn to screenplay, the screenplay may turn to prose. Either is fine. Just keep going (are you noticing a theme yet?).

Maybe your problem is plotting. You aren’t sure where your story goes immediately, but you have a goal, you know where it’s going overall. It may be time for an outline. Yes, an outline. You look at me as if I said a dirty word, memories of your pigeon faced English teacher in high school are running through your mind and now you know you’ll never write again. Let me rephrase just a little bit. It may be time for a near-term outline. List out the next three main scenes you have in mind in a couple key sentences. Now you’re a story paleontologist, and you’re looking for the missing link. Write a sentence that would fall between them, and another. Summarizing is fine at this point. Just keep going until you have everything you need to be writing again.

Or, find a writer (we tend to hang around on twitter and facebook a lot). Ask questions. Ask for help. When a writer asks for help and I see it, I’ll usually jump in. Seriously. Every time I help a writer through an issue or help a writer make a decision, I learn more, I hone my skills, my craft. I get energized. Every writer out there has been in your situation before, we all have our ways. We all like to share them. Even the best get stuck on plot at times, and the key is out there. You just need to ask. Unlike our characters, we don’t bite.

The point I want to keep making is nothing will allow you to overcome a block better than keeping yourself directly entangled in the work you’re trying to do. Stepping away from it is stepping away from it, no matter what you call it. You have to confront the block, if you step away the blockage will only get stronger, and probably start calling you bad names behind your back and ruing your reputation.

So what else might be plaguing the blocked writer?

You may be suffering a disconnect from your material. I had to go to an extreme recently to reconnect with some material, and you can read about that in the post just before this one. There are lesser extremes, ones that don’t open old emotional wounds.

First warning. Editing a previous part of the book may seem like a great idea, and it probably is if you’re picking up the book a really long time after you laid it down, but if the story is fresh for you, it’s a very bad idea to go back and edit. You’ll hate what you’ve already done (you’re already in a hypercritical mood after all), and you’ll get caught up in minutiae that don’t matter. For most people, writer head is very different from editor head. Let them exist separately.

Like a lot of writers, I’m a pretty intense researcher. I have a file for my big book with news stories (its sometimes ripped from the headlines, sometimes the headlines rip from it), images of various kinds, an iTunes playlist, movies and books that will remind me of what I’m trying to do. Some of it is sorted according to plot point of the WIP. If I get stuck, I’ll take a brief foray into these. The important note is brief. Very brief. Then get back to writing.

What we’re trying to accomplish is the creation of flow. You should check out the books on Flow and Creativity by Professor Mihalyi. They’re brilliant. In flow, a minute will seem like an hour, an hour will seem like a minute, you’ll forget conversations, you’ll forget about the need to eat, and solutions will come to you. When you’re blocked, you’re about as far from flow as you can be.

A big part of flow is choosing and creating your environment. There is a good basic quick idea about flow and environment. Some people say changing your environment will help, get up, go to eat, get coffee (these are of course contingent on you taking your writing device and writing while elsewhere). I never found that a change of environment helped me or was necessary until I was hungry, in fact, discovering a monster in my belly that needed sating was a good cue to move out of the house and get food and keep writing. Clean off all of the kipple from your desk (preferably with a cathartic single swipe of your arm), and keep writing. Immerse yourself in an environment that reminds you of your project.

Part of environment is time. Make a schedule to develop a habit of writing. Schedule a couple hours at least. Give the kids to the significant other, give the dog a shot of wine to make it drowsy (not really, but you get the idea), close and lock the door. Make your writing time your own, and make the consequences of disturbing you clear and severe. This is YOUR time to write. Not theirs.

The reason I tell you to schedule a couple of hours is important. Rather than switching to something else to get past your block, try switching to your project. Write some warm up, a character sketch, something else. Struggle on words you definitely won’t let anyone see, and when you’re warm, dive in. You may just come up with something useful or a new story. It will help create a flow, and take the pressure off of sitting down to a screen and thinking these words count.

In fact, I really think the correct term for writer’s block is flow block. Really, we mostly know what we want to write, we just can’t get the flow going.

I like the concept of setting a writing goal, a deadline for completion, or a minimum word count for the day, but for some people, this can add to the fear of failure. Another problem with this is knowing that some scenes are definitely way harder than others, and we don’t necessarily know which will be one of these scenes until we’re in it. The extreme of this is the program write or die, which I believe you can find on-line. I’ve never tried it, but it works for some people. Turning off the internet should also be considered. This would fall into the eliminate distractions category. I really think an important part of setting a goal is setting an accomplishable goal. Saying 5,000 words a day or else is likely not practical unless you’ve got no distractions, commitments and day job. You’ll likely hit it sometimes, but you’ll feel bad when you don’t. Setting a goal of 500 words is manageable, and if you’re dead set on 500, you’re probably doing 1,000 or more without thinking about it. That requirement of 500 is merely a requirement that you sit down and get something out, keep it going.

Another part of your environment is the tools you work with. Are you still working with Microsoft Word just like it was 1994? Ditch that program. Try something like Celtx or Scrivener, where you can make notes, save multiple documents in the same file, create character profiles, setting profiles, and just about anything else you may like to do. You may also try mindmapping. A program like Freemind can open yourself up to some very fast sketching of plotlines, and the speed with which you can throw down and alter with this program is faster than anything else out there. It will get your synapses moving, and will actually help you find connections in your WIP more easily.

If you still can’t get yourself to put words down on your project, the next best thing you can do is to write on something else. You may have a short story you’re dabbling on, a side project. These things are important. I really believe in letting my subconscious work things out. Best way to do that is to give my conscious mind a cat toy to bat around. If you don’t have that, do some writing exercises. Try finding a portrait of someone and write a character sketch. Try some flash fiction. I came up with stories from a hat. That would work. Notice, the most important thing is to start writing, keep writing. If you are blocked, no word set down is wasted. Stop thinking that every word must be gold, because you’re going throw a lot away as a writer. It is just part of the process. It may be important for you to remember that no one ever needs see what you’re setting down. Take that pressure off yourself.

When I’m really well locked into flow I’ll trade off activities, but I don’t recommend it if you’re really blocked. It is a very slippery slope between giving yourself a break and distracting yourself under the guise of a writing break and not getting anything done. When everything is working for me in writing, I’ll work on the novel until my brain says to stop. Then play guitar. Then do some art or craft. By then my brain has allowed the subconscious to assemble the next part and kick it back up to my conscious mind. Repeat. It is worth noting however that these are rarely my best moments at the other tasks.

So here we are, 2,500 words into an essay and I’ll now talk about doing something other than writing to get yourself over a block. This is how important I think writing your way out of a writing block is. Stopping writing  is the most dangerous thing you can do, and you have to recognize when to do it. There may be a time to put the writing away for a while. The brain needs down time, science has studied and confirmed this. The down time doesn’t mean go do email or play a game, the science says that isn’t really down time, and for a writer, it forms a part of that slippery slope. It needs to be real down time. Let it recharge. But don’t do this for too long, or it will be harder to start up again.

Writing is also a basic input-output system. Many of us writers don’t read, not nearly enough. I hear this complaint of many writers, professional and aspiring alike. We need input data, and when our memory of source material is used up, we need to refill the buffer. Read a book. I think I’ve heard the right ratio of reading to writing is ten to one, and that seems about right. Make the time, it is an investment in your writing future.

There are other reasons for block, more personal and psychological reasons that may be a more difficult thing to diagnose in this venue. I’ll revisit the topic as long as you give me some comments on your specific block. Or find me. I’m up here and on twitter and facebook. I’ll certainly listen and give you some ideas. But that’s it for now, Need to get back to writing.

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Lesson Learned

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So I was trying to reconnect with Inside, and it was proving so difficult, I took a very extreme step. I’m shocked that I did this myself, that out of a weekend of intense depression, I found a way through.

It started a week ago, and my friend Lena was in town. We were talking about my current situation fairly in-depth, and she mentioned my ex, Nicole. She asked what Nicole was doing now, and if I’d tried to contact her. The answer was I don’t know, and no. While that relationship had inspired “Inside,” it was just a bit of personal history so far removed from my current situation, I wasn’t sure I even participated in it in the first place.

Well, the week went by, and my mood got worse and worse. There was a point during the relationship where I knew it was the best thing that ever happened to me, and now as I look back I agree with that in some ways. The pain that came out of the end (and it wasn’t just the relationship ending that caused pain at the time, there was much more going on at the same moment the relationship ended), brought a lot of growth and inspiration to my writing. As my friend Michael described Inside, it is my first book with very deep and real characters with rich emotional content. For this reason, the relationship probably was the best thing that happened to me.

But now I’m here five tumultuous years later, and I have to reconnect with the material, and things have not settled at all. The difficulties I have faced over the last five years have warn me down and changed who I am. I’d rather not be who I am right now, and I’d like to go back to where I was.

Inside is an intense book, a lot of hate and pain is coming to its pages, a lot of difficult choices and a lot of suffering, but there’s a lot of joy in this opening hundred pages or so, and that joy also came of the relationship with Nicole.

I thought I had to reconnect with the pain, which is the future of the book. Well, everything I tried didn’t reconnect me, so I searched her out. If I saw her, I knew what I’d feel, and I did. I did feel the pain. I hadn’t looked for her in all the time since we split, I absolutely had not, but she was a good painter, and an amazing person. I knew she’d be onto some amazing work these days. I had no intention of contacting her.

But I forgot something. There is joy before the pain, just as there was in this relationship.

But there hasn’t been joy in mine for a long time, I’ve practically forgotten what it feels like, and I think that was what I’d been having trouble connecting with, the joy.

And when I found her, I thought, what the hell? So I sent her a comment on her business on Facebook. Maybe I’ll send her an email, and it will probably be ignored. I told her I always knew she’d do something amazing, and she is. Truly. I miss what we had for that brief time greatly, but I got a little more written in the book, and that was the point of it.

Now if I could reconnect with joy a little bit in my real life, maybe I wouldn’t be such a moody bastard.

Getting reacquainted

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So my current work in progress was started five years ago. Life intervened, and still does, so I’ve had to put it down and pick it back up, and I’m looking for the right way back in. Adding to the complications with this, I changed my mind on the scope of this story, deciding on making it much smaller than I had intended, though how well that works out, we’ll see. I’m running about a quarter less while I wanted at least half the length. We’ll figure that one out as we edit.

But editing requires that I get to the end of the book, and I have a long way to go to get there. I’m through maybe 5-10% of the story so far, and really it’s just kicking off.

So how to reconnect? That’s the question. If life has intruded on your story as it did on mine, here’s some ideas to get you back into the story again. I’m not sure on process on this one. Take a look at each step, and consider the order you want to do it in.

I’m blessed with a really good memory, or cursed depending on the day. I remember everything, so finding the facts of the story isn’t really an issue. If it is for you, I hope you took copious notes on your story, have a good outline, your settings are well detailed, and all your character studies are in order. You did do all of that as you developed the story , right?

I’m a fairly immersive researcher as a writer, and so I keep a file of research for each project, This file may contain images, news articles, anything that fits into the story somehow. Thankfully this story is kind of ripped from the headlines (and sometimes the headlines are ripped from it), so there is continuous news to inspire me, and even as I put the story aside, I never stopped finding inspiration, as unfortunate as that is. Much of the inspiration I had for this is of a very bigoted, violent, phobic nature.

The first iPod I got was a 6 gig nano, and I loaded it up with music that fit the themes of “Inside.” well, 6 gigs isn’t enough, not by a long shot, so I got a 30 gb one not long after, and well, that one wasn’t quite enough either. I now have a 160 gb, so I can put on music that isn’t just about the book. So it’s time to make up the playlist again. Listening to it during the day really puts me in a headspace, and from that headspace comes a good flow for writing. Of course, it’s also brutally dark, moody music, not brutal metal, but manic depressive stuff about people hurting each other, and all of this dark input makes me a very dark person.

I have edited what I had. I know, I always say to keep moving forward, don’t go back and edit, you’ll get lost. In this case, it allowed me to review choices, and get into the moment of the story. It is almost like an actor getting back into character. You need to bring it back to the moment, and now that I’ve reached the point of writing forward, I feel in the moment of the story much better than if I had tried to pick up from where I left off. I know the history in all its details, and I’m writing as if it were happening now.

This was definitely the right decision. I’m sure I’d notice errors and gaps if I hadn’t gone back to the beginning. It would be more work in the editing stage, and take longer to get up to speed in the story in terms of pages until I reached flow again.

Of course, going back to the original inspiration is also important. In my case, it’s going back to losing the best relationship I’ve ever had. Right now in the book, we’re in the good parts, so I’m trying to relive the good parts, but I also know what’s coming. This makes me nostalgic for the past in a way that my character will be feeling later on in the book, and I try to relive those experiences. I can remember the feel of her and the taste of her in such detail (remember, my memory is a curse, and she’s haunting me), that its almost real, and I’m close to tears at times remembering. I do want there to be moments of feeling this darkness as the situation is good in the book, and so the duality of feelings is probably dead on what I need.

Of course this makes me moody and reserved, so I’ll take out the writing of this book on all of you. Sorry, but its for a good cause.

So there’s a few ideas. If anybody has any others, I’d love to hear them.

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